I love your entry, Ben! You managed quite a lot, so many details! I see you are trying to get votes through cameos (all the monitors) and grandness.

I find it funny and interesting what you did with my
thumbnails of your first page. You made them look better than I would have.
I love all the colorful cables and how Kensington looks when she enters the secret room. :D
Also good to finally see part of Phalanx, the omnipresent supercomputer who keeps the citizens under surveillance.
The half-bat joke was fantastic! And Gilbert the gelatinous cube trying on pants! I really need to pust Nevada's character description. Also lucky for Kensington how everything just works out in her favour: open window, entangling, informants who know when to shut up.
Well done, als always! :D