the main issue with your cycle now that i really am intrigued by your writing is... your art. i like the usage of the limited or just spotwise colourpallette but its doesnt make a fluid impression on me. you could have put a light grey under everything and take some of the contrast away and highlight it here and there for the characters.
for example the dark background where Tal is roof diving... it displays good that there is a night setting but beside the plain white building its just a bit too fiercly pushed for my taste and while the whole comic appears to be quiet clean and strong in its lines i get the feeling you could have done better on those smoke effekts and the eagle eye...
still its one of my favourites when it comes to your work. hope you had fun
