[002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief [Done]

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Please vote for your winner!

Poll ended at Fri May 11, 2012 10:58 pm

Oxefer (Papillion Belle)
1
6%
ComicRelief (Tal Sopher)
15
94%
 
Total votes : 16

Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby elyan » Tue May 01, 2012 11:38 am

aaaah i liked this cycle... beside the really strange way this little monster acted i see a nice build up here. misunderstandings and teamups out of the neccesity also really nice idea how to express our heros powers and also funny.

the main issue with your cycle now that i really am intrigued by your writing is... your art. i like the usage of the limited or just spotwise colourpallette but its doesnt make a fluid impression on me. you could have put a light grey under everything and take some of the contrast away and highlight it here and there for the characters.
for example the dark background where Tal is roof diving... it displays good that there is a night setting but beside the plain white building its just a bit too fiercly pushed for my taste and while the whole comic appears to be quiet clean and strong in its lines i get the feeling you could have done better on those smoke effekts and the eagle eye...

still its one of my favourites when it comes to your work. hope you had fun :)
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Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby Patent Pending » Wed May 02, 2012 1:51 am

Yay! You're definitely improving Oxy :) Your anatomy and angles have definitely gotten an upgrade. Exploding butterflies are always fun, and I like how you used Tal's powers! (Yay Portal!)

One thing I'd work on is maybe your page layouts, and making things a little clearer. I was a little confused on the first page there.
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Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby Oxefer » Wed May 02, 2012 4:20 am

thank you both ^_^ yes i will work a bit more on learning better fluidity and color i was experimenting alot lately lol
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Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby ComicRelief » Sat May 05, 2012 9:39 pm

A little prologue of what happened before the battle~

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Then continuing on...
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ALTERNATE ENDING:
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Last edited by ComicRelief on Sat May 05, 2012 11:41 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby Oxefer » Sat May 05, 2012 9:53 pm

this was fun battle and a fun read ^_^
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Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby Einheit12 » Sat May 05, 2012 10:57 pm

This fight has not been extended. Please vote for the winner now!

    ComicRelief was awarded:
    70 Points

    Achievements:
    Image Secret Lab (5)



    Image The Big Picture (5)
    Image Flash! (1)
    Image Long Answer (10)
    Image Fashion Guru (5)
    Image Where's Wally (5)
    Image Corporate Identity (5)
    Image Turncoat (5)
    Image They made you, they can destroy you (10)

    =51 Points (Achievements)

    Total: 121 Points

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Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby Five » Sun May 06, 2012 12:08 pm

I greatly enjoyed your entry, Comic! It was both entertaining and well drawn. :-)
You put in a lot of details and stuff like "hiding room" and "no portals/standing around aimlessly" made me laugh.
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Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby Patent Pending » Sun May 06, 2012 5:25 pm

GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRLLLL
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Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby Father_Frost » Sun May 06, 2012 11:47 pm

:hyper:

Duuude!!!

Awesome read!

Love your intro comic and how you picked it up in your entry!

Feels like you evolved into "fullgrown comic artiste"!

The flow of your layouts and the feel for all the different characters is very enjoyable. Hope you'll stick around!!

Vaguely remember that guy with the teeth... wasn't he a muppet or something early in the days?

greetz, Frost
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Re: [002] Oxefer vs. ComicRelief

Postby Horokeh » Sun May 06, 2012 11:50 pm

Hold up... When did this bitch come back to life... stop whinning about how terrible he is at drawing... produce a full comic and come back with out me knowing???


Great job bitch... great job

**slow clap**


Edit:What happened indeed...
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