[014]Falcon vs. Ben[Done]

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Who was the most Sewerish?

Poll ended at Sun Apr 21, 2013 10:47 pm

Falcon (Noah Bright)
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Ben (Robotic Magicianman)
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Total votes : 6

[014]Falcon vs. Ben[Done]

Postby Einheit12 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 2:02 pm

Fight Number #014

Falcon's Noah Bright versus Ben's Cyborg Necromancer
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At the Sewers / Wastewater Plant

Entry 1 is due Sunday, 7th April 2013 (Falcon)
Entry 2 is due Sunday, 14th April 2013 (Ben)


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Re: [014]Falcon vs. Ben

Postby Einheit12 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 2:03 pm

Hint: Falcon, your Character Image is incorrectly sized. The correct dimensions are 400 x 800 pixel. Please update it as soon as possible!
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Re: [014]Falcon vs. Ben

Postby Falcon » Sat Apr 06, 2013 1:43 pm

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Re: [014]Falcon vs. Ben

Postby Falcon » Sat Apr 06, 2013 1:47 pm

Well, this is my first comic ever made. I have a lot to learn, but I'm satisfied about the result.
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Re: [014]Falcon vs. Ben

Postby Ben » Tue Apr 09, 2013 11:15 pm

I like how you tied it in with the whole 238 plot thread, along with some appropriately morally shaky schemes. Hopefully my character can survive without being dismantled into base components by the end of this! The first thing I'd suggest is to use larger text in places and not to use such light colours atop a white background - it takes some eye straining to read. Of course you shall learn more skills with every comic you create!

I have started to sketch a reply. Meanwhile, I have my first try at drawing Noah:

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Re: [014]Falcon vs. Ben

Postby Falcon » Wed Apr 10, 2013 1:30 pm

Thanks for the feedback Ben.I'll keep your advice in mind for the next comic. Unfortunately I've never done anything like this and not having a graphics tablet waste much time in translating the paper on your computer and then edit them. However, your sketch is just great! If I can just give you some advice maybe the neck is a bit too long, but the rest is wonderful.
I can not wait to know how you will continue the story.
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Re: [014]Falcon vs. Ben

Postby Einheit12 » Sat Apr 13, 2013 2:26 pm

    Falcon was awarded:
    70 Points
    Achievements:
    Image Sewers & Wastewater Plant (5)




    Image Short Answer (5)
    Image Fine Print (-1)
    Image Eye of the Tiger (1)
    Image Newton's Law (5)
    Image Unobtainium (1)


    = 16 Points (Achievements)
    Total earned: 86 Points
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Re: [014]Falcon vs. Ben

Postby Ben » Mon Apr 15, 2013 1:10 am

Here are my pages. Hope you like it, Falcon! And yeah I do have a tendency to draw people as giraffes.

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Re: [014]Falcon vs. Ben

Postby Falcon » Mon Apr 15, 2013 12:07 pm

OMG! It's awesome!
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Re: [014]Falcon vs. Ben

Postby Einheit12 » Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:46 pm

This fight has not been extended. Please vote for the winner now!

    Ben was awarded:
    70 Points
    Achievements:
    Image Sewers & Wastewater Plant (5)




    Image The Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat (10)
    Image Where's Waldo (1)
    Image The Perfect Storm (1)
    Image Hindenburg Memorial Achievement (1)




    Image Addict (20)


    = 38 Points (Achievements)
    Total earned: 108 Points
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