[Intro Comic] Noah Bright

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[Intro Comic] Noah Bright

Postby Falcon » Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:02 pm

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Re: [Intro Comic] Noah Bright

Postby Five » Tue Mar 12, 2013 7:27 pm

    Falcon was awarded:
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    Total earned: 10 Points

Sadly we cannot give you points for pages without images.

I think you did a good job with characterizing Noah, we learned many things about his motifs and personality. I would love to see a few pictures even when there is so much text. And I would advise to post your pages a little larger or make the text a bit larger. The first page has a good size, the last page is a bit hard to read because the text is so small.
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Re: [Intro Comic] Noah Bright

Postby Falcon » Wed Mar 13, 2013 1:03 pm

Thanks for the suggestions FiveI, I will take note of it for the next comic. All this information will be useful to me. Maybe I will try to develop a little more the character before sending it to fight someone.
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Re: [Intro Comic] Noah Bright

Postby Ben » Fri Mar 22, 2013 12:44 pm

Welcome, Captain Falcon! You seem to have some delightfully dystopian plots in mind. Very fitting for the setting! I foresee a bright future.
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