[Intro Comic] Noah Bright

[Falcon]

[Five]

Falcon was awarded:
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I think you did a good job with characterizing Noah, we learned many things about his motifs and personality. I would love to see a few pictures even when there is so much text. And I would advise to post your pages a little larger or make the text a bit larger. The first page has a good size, the last page is a bit hard to read because the text is so small.

[Falcon]

Thanks for the suggestions FiveI, I will take note of it for the next comic. All this information will be useful to me. Maybe I will try to develop a little more the character before sending it to fight someone.

[Ben]

Welcome, Captain Falcon! You seem to have some delightfully dystopian plots in mind. Very fitting for the setting! I foresee a bright future.