by AnTinwoodsman » Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:46 pm
Really impressive cycle Penryn, you've set all the pieces in place to begin our final clash for the fate of Arcadia! Now its up to Mr.Green and myself to pluck the heartstrings and sever a few arteries as well eh?
Your greyscale adds some nice depth and layers to the simple and clean linework. The storytelling on Cori's past and motivations are concise but endearing. I'm glad you incorporated my pages into your framework and then expanded on Tin's role from there.
Your cityscape was especially atmospheric, definitely adds a lot to the sense of place that I think a story of this type requires, I plan on utilizing it well. You should do backgrounds more often.
Five and Ben- you marvelous punks! Your colors and immaculate detail lend this story such a sense of life and gravitas that I fear we inker types often lack. Thank ye kindly for sprucing up our foray into the future with your flourishes of raw talent. Quite the riveting cliffhanger- or airduct hanger, I suppose, in this instance.