R:32 Tin & Green vs. Penryn

[Five]

Ah, you finally posted it, yaaay! I really like your drawing style and I'm happy to see this story unfold.
I hope Tin has enough time to do a few pages before he has to leave on the weekend (Tin, don't do too much, only as many pages you can handle before you leave!).
Of course I'm happy to see my character included too but I also enjoyed the storytelling.
Undercuts/mohawks are quite popular in the future. :>

[Spike]

Yeah dude this ended up turning out pretty slick.

Also Five, mohawks are awesome

[AnTinwoodsman]

Really impressive cycle Penryn, you've set all the pieces in place to begin our final clash for the fate of Arcadia! Now its up to Mr.Green and myself to pluck the heartstrings and sever a few arteries as well eh?

Your greyscale adds some nice depth and layers to the simple and clean linework. The storytelling on Cori's past and motivations are concise but endearing. I'm glad you incorporated my pages into your framework and then expanded on Tin's role from there.
Your cityscape was especially atmospheric, definitely adds a lot to the sense of place that I think a story of this type requires, I plan on utilizing it well. You should do backgrounds more often.

Five and Ben- you marvelous punks! Your colors and immaculate detail lend this story such a sense of life and gravitas that I fear we inker types often lack. Thank ye kindly for sprucing up our foray into the future with your flourishes of raw talent. Quite the riveting cliffhanger- or airduct hanger, I suppose, in this instance.

[AnTinwoodsman]

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[Green]

I'll go ahead and post it myself.

[Jin]

This battle looks absolute fantastic guys!!!! I really got excited when Tin did all those awesome cameos! xD It's really intriguing that this is all taking place in the future!

[penryn88]

i'm gonna try not to be, but i may be late again. mabye monday, if not, for sure tuesday.

[AnTinwoodsman]

Completely understandable. This is quite the massive round. Let me know If you want a few pages tho I'm sure you've got plenty of help.

[Luthor]

I'm running a bit late as I didn't start until Pen got Tin's email on Wednesday of what his cycle would be so Pen will have to post tomorrow hopefully. Sorry about it

[Green]

No worries. You guys have the luxury of the last cycle. Just make it great, I'm really looking forward to what you guys present ^_^