[Intro Comic] Noah Bright

[Falcon]

Hi guys. I've just done my intro comic sketch, so is a matter of two or three days until I will outline the edges with a program and I will upload it. For now, if you want here is my sheet.
http://fav.me/d5vqzmh

[elyan]

somehow i feel you should try drawing directly in ink.

when you get the chance think a little about perspective... the other thing is try not to waste space on the paper. avoid wide blank areas where you could have done a larger panel and such.

i see you are putting effort in there so maybe take the chance and try some other versions. maybe you´ll get a better outcome. its what several proffesionals do too to make sure they get the best result from their creations.

[Falcon]

thanks for the suggestion. Actually I did not liked the result of the sketch, but did not know how to improve it. The blank spaces were left to put the balloons with the words, anyway I'll try to do another version.